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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by JL Beowolf, Oct 27, 2007.

  1. Oct 27, 2007 at 9:35 PM #1
    JL Beowolf

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  2. Nov 1, 2007 at 9:21 PM #2
    JL Beowolf

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    anybody?
     
  3. Nov 1, 2007 at 9:25 PM #3
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    The splatter on her eye could be displaced/blended better, and it just doesn't appeal much to me overall. Keep trying though..
     
  4. Nov 1, 2007 at 11:13 PM #4
    CarpeDiem

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    The coloring of the lips. Not sure, but maybe it should be more detailed and fit on the lips better, or maybe you were going for that look.
     
  5. Nov 2, 2007 at 1:29 AM #5
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    ya i say blend the eye and the splater better then it would be better...
     

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