<span style="font-family:Times New Roman">#4 Attempt</span> This is my 4th try what do you think.... i know i still need to improve on text im havin a lot of probles with text for some reason.. any tips would mean a lot to me thks. Plz crit my work
Yea what you said about the text is right and i have the same problem with text umm i think its a little dark but thats just me. Maybe a bit more action in the background. Also more flow.
ya true it is a bit dark.... here is my next one im tryin left out the text this time i just wantded to see if i could achive depth, so plz tell me if i have im not too sure...
