Human After All

Just spent a long time on this one. I haven't made one like this before.

Border:


Or no border:


C&C please.

EDIT: Lol, can't see the border because the forums background.

 

I've never really seen anything like that before. I really like it. Great work.

 

I don't like it very much, but it's just my opinion. I think you should mess more with gradient maps and with the letring, as with that render the bg doesn't blend very well.

 

I actually used a stock for it and smudged/c4d'd it.

 

What i said tho, and it's not saying that i am any better or worse than you are, is that the bg ( blended or not ) doesnt flow with the kind of "render" you got back there, but i think if you applied some effect c4d, sharppened, blurred the corners, added some light and got a Black to White gradient map the tag'd be great.

 

There's 5 gradient maps and a color balance in the sig. But it does need sharpening. I'll do that now.


EDIT: How's this?