My 2nd Ever Smudge Tag

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by bnoc450, Oct 29, 2007.

  1. bnoc450

    bnoc450 Active Member

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    CnC plz, 2nd time i use smudging in a tag
     
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    hey man, thats really nice for your second!

    Heres what I think, I think you should work abit more on the flow, right now its just like dots at random places, make them flow nicely togheter!
    and the render is way to over sharpened for my taste. Try to un-sharpen it abit ;) Try adding some light to it aswell, to give it some more depth.

    GJ :)
     
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    thats cool work nice flow and it goes well.maybe jus add i dont knw it looks preety cool like that..some light sourcr coz it seems a dull in sum bits.
     
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    SuicidalS0ulja Well-Known Member

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    Yeah try and blur it abit more looks way too sharp, what brush we're you using to smudge because it doesn't seem to follow a patter?
    Looks nice though just work of sharpness.
     
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    yep the render and the little pieces are to sharp
     
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    The flow and smudging is good, but it is kind of dull. That should be the start of your sig, and then build on that. Add some depth and lighting and it could look really cool.
     
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    Heheh,
    I've never done a smudge tag so
    I can't really say. :lol: But it looks nice
    to me. :D I've seen lots of them. ;)

    The Chief looks a little oversharp though.

    Keep it up. :D
     

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