I take it that the girl there is your stock? Erm, the background you didn't make? What exactly did you do? I think this one needs to be redone or something, not to mention the coloring is kind of bland. . . . I think you just started out with a bad stock. It is choppy and unblended. I don't want to sound mean though, please don't take it that way. Are you just starting out? ; ; Tutorials. . . Hint: Add borders.
the final fantasy stock doesnt fit in with the bg at all m8, use something that has a halloween theme and work on the bg a bit more.