Halo Sig

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  1. Oct 28, 2007 at 9:46 PM #1
    .Rey

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    I'm kinda new at GFX'ing and just made this sig. If anyone could give me some suggestions that would be greatly appreciated. ;)

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    Here is Version 2:

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    v3:

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    v4:

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  2. Oct 28, 2007 at 9:55 PM #2
    AKW

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    It seems to be lacking a little bit of debth. Add more lighting to it and some more detail in the background. Then it will look better. Then just update the post with your new one. =)
     
  3. Oct 28, 2007 at 9:59 PM #3
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    Amen to this.

    Do something on your background. Observe proper flow and coloring as these are necessary for a good tag.
     
  4. Oct 28, 2007 at 10:04 PM #4
    .Rey

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    Alright. I'll try and add some more light and some flow to the background. I'll post my new result soon.
     
  5. Oct 28, 2007 at 10:05 PM #5
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    Alright bro, good luck. =)
     
  6. Oct 28, 2007 at 10:21 PM #6
    .Rey

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    Thanks. I added v2 to the top. Is it any better?
     
  7. Oct 28, 2007 at 10:24 PM #7
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    Okay, yeah, a little lighter. Now add debth and shadows. Also, note that your BG doesn't need to remind people of a wall. Think of how much graffiti sticks out and 3D's itself, then try to mimic that on your BG's. Keep working on it.
     
  8. Oct 28, 2007 at 10:35 PM #8
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    Im on it ;)
     
  9. Oct 28, 2007 at 10:41 PM #9
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    added v3
     
  10. Oct 29, 2007 at 12:01 AM #10
    .Rey

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    any more suggestions ^_^
     
  11. Oct 29, 2007 at 1:00 AM #11
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    Add some more depth, lighting, and negative space. Try to use some c4ds too.

    If you're new, feel free to read some of the tutorials in our database. :)
     
  12. Oct 29, 2007 at 10:00 AM #12
    WaRCrY SaBoTaG3

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    yea C4Ds help alot
     
  13. Oct 29, 2007 at 10:41 AM #13
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    i like the first 1
    v2 n v3 background are like too plain
    quite blur for the render though
    anyway as they advise..u should use some c4ds xD
     
  14. Oct 29, 2007 at 3:03 PM #14
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    Added v4
     

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