I really really like this image. Of course because you played with the light to make it more realistic, then you're bound to get criticism. I'm sorry for that fact, because it's good. Hyperfocus in the front is great, but you have smoke that is practically in the same space as his body that is very blurry. IMVWO, that is what distracts the viewer. If the dust on his body was changed, and he was hyperfocused on top of a racked background, I think it would work... AMAZING job on the lighting though.
