Its a cool idea, the focus is off though. I would think some colour would be nice though not sure i would have to see both to say that. But nice work for a begginer
Hmmmm... Well, I don't like the thatch thing. I think it's way too plain. But it doesn't look bad. It's your best so far, but I guarantee it won't be your best after you check out some of the hot tutorials in the tut section. Maybe you already have. Keep checking them out. They will progress your skill very fast. Keep up the good work
alright thanks guys... i would use tuts more but last time i did it it took like an hour.. i dont have time to do that
