I'm not feelin' this one bro. There's too much grit, so the focul went to crap. Especially on his face. The effects look wierd and the whole comp's strange. Idk, may just be meh taste. Sorry Just giving my honest oppinion.
no problem bro', much appreciated. i tried stuff totally different here. i wanted something grungy but not old school grungy..i'll keep working on this style and see where it goes.. i love my text though..
Yeah, Agreed. The text is chocolate. I could kind of see where you were going with it. I think it would look better with a more developed focul. I'd like to see another with this same style. ^_^
the smoky effect is great, it's just unfortunate that it sits so much on his face. Wicked work anyway, mate. Nice to see experimentation.
I love the text, everything on the left side looks awsome, then I look at the right ide and its like to gritty, This just isn't my type of tag, but that's fine if you like it =) Good luck in the future.
not bad but jus dont like tht line thing on his face n mabe more of tht colour u ve used..good stuf oh n the text needs to be chnaged cant read it
Text doesnt need any change, it's perfect you have to look good to read it, so it attracts attention to the sig. Somehow this tag seems to have potencial of being a masterpiece, but it just didn't come out right. You went wrong somewhere, wich is fine, because it's a first time experiment, I would love to see something different from this style
right side grit effects look really nice...just erase some of the stuff off of his face...left side is good too...has a "fog" feel to it maybe from the smoke and the hard to read text fits well with the smoke
