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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Faith.09, Oct 25, 2007.

  1. Faith.09

    Faith.09 Banned from GR

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    Help me improve ;)
     
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    try to add more depth in the tag, there nothing going ion in the bg, so it looks really flat

    Effects look great though nice work ;)
     
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    Guild Wars FTW...

    I think if you brought the paragons head down...made it the focul you would of been on the right track. Effects looks good, the focul is just off...
     
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    the whole face should be shown
     
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    k, thx :)
     
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    Yep,
    Looks good, focul's off though. ;)
    It's a B&W tag so the effects can't be
    much better.

    Good work

    Work on that focul. ;)
     
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    iagree. work on the focal. and. ueah thats pretty much it nice efffects
     
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    The fact that his face is not all there just shows how un-important he is. If you know what I mean. You used him as your render, yet you aren't displaying his dominance. I feel that the dark skin of the Paragon is a good focal, but the white around him is a LOT too bright.

    You know guys, it's not light that always has to draw in the focus point, and it isn't always darkness that adds depth.

    :)
     
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