I like it, great smudging the C4Ds are subtle enough to not pull attention. and as you said, the only downside is the text. Id like to see a B&W version, with a nice contrast layer and some use of the burn/dodge tools. Great work man!
tnx a lot for the comments guys I had a b/w version btw, but on another forum they didn't really like it so i just sticked to this version