I was going for a view from below, and some flame and evil stuff comes creeping up on the guy, like they're taking him. Yeah, lol. CnC plz.
Very nice. A bit different, and wierd, but it works. The text is good, and the effect of the smudge/liquify is nice, but you need to change the D. Its a bit off, and looks like an o or 0. Also, i suggest changing the blank space at the bottom right. Its completely different to the rest of the signature and I think it looks out of place.
Right side is plain and sticks out a bit too much for my likings. Awesome composition though mate, and well executed.
focal is weak imo. its split beteen the render, the runic circle thingy, the text and the big black neg space on the right. simplify it and it will look a lot better. great effects. just bring the compo up to match it.
Very nice effects, but I do agree weak focul. I think there's too many things in the way. It took me a while to "get" it. But, that said, Extremely cool idea. Just needs a little work. Great job mate.