Bioshock // Don't Leave Me!

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Xioushi, Oct 23, 2007.

  1. Xioushi

    Xioushi Well-Known Member

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    I just installed bioshock and I love it so much, I made my smudge sig for the SOTW, not sure if I wanna keep it though. It's really hard to compete against these other amazing works.

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    thats pretty tight. i love it. nice efects and lighting and colors and everything. great tag.
     
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    That's awesome mate, I love it.
     
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    Xioushi Well-Known Member

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    Thanks guys, I wasn't sure if I was going to keep like, like I said. You guys kinda boosted my ego and my thoughts of it, thanks. :)
     
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    It is a VERY nice tag but there is one SLIGHT problem:

    The pixel text may blend in a TAD too much. Not much, but just enough to squint. It wouldn't matter so much but your text is what makes the point of view you are expressing so important on this piece.
     
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    Move the text, ditch the lens flare. Also, work on blending and lighting.

    Also, for a smudge comp entry, theres a blatant lack of clear smudging.
     
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    Idk,
    I like it.

    I really like the concept. ;)
    The lighting looks good to me.

    I do agree that for a smudge entry
    there's not much visible smudging. :\

    But, hey, it's still a great tag. ;)
     
  8. Xioushi

    Xioushi Well-Known Member

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    I kinda of agree with you guys, but for the competition, not many people show that much smudging either. I'll probably edit it and step it up a bit, but for now, at least the concept is amusing, thanks for the comments.

    :)
     
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    man that is sweet. great job with the lighting
     

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