I just installed bioshock and I love it so much, I made my smudge sig for the SOTW, not sure if I wanna keep it though. It's really hard to compete against these other amazing works.
Thanks guys, I wasn't sure if I was going to keep like, like I said. You guys kinda boosted my ego and my thoughts of it, thanks.
It is a VERY nice tag but there is one SLIGHT problem: The pixel text may blend in a TAD too much. Not much, but just enough to squint. It wouldn't matter so much but your text is what makes the point of view you are expressing so important on this piece.
Move the text, ditch the lens flare. Also, work on blending and lighting. Also, for a smudge comp entry, theres a blatant lack of clear smudging.
Idk, I like it. I really like the concept. The lighting looks good to me. I do agree that for a smudge entry there's not much visible smudging. :\ But, hey, it's still a great tag.
I kinda of agree with you guys, but for the competition, not many people show that much smudging either. I'll probably edit it and step it up a bit, but for now, at least the concept is amusing, thanks for the comments.