Liking the text on this one, I think it's better than your other text on other sigs... It has a good flow and depth as well. The light source seems a bit overpowering though. Maybe tone it down a bit to keep the focal on the render. Good beans :]
i really like the lighting but i agree on the colors. maybe try a curves layer with a gradiany layer mask going toward the lightsource or something. or something. or something
Work on the lighting, and try add a few more colours in there. Other than that its very good. Keep up the good work, mate.
lighting can be fixed by believe it or not but more light behind his other shoulder but not much will aid depth and colors..>=)
K thanks, It does sound odd, but I'll try it. Gotta take them tips. >=) My little face is like this ---> })