The lighting is bad, and the c4d makes the person look kinda awkward, also it needs depth imo. So basically, the c4d either needs to be blended better or taken out, and the tag needs to be darkened a little so the lighting doesn't look so forced.
i agree, lighting is too intense. I prefer V2, not liking the txt. Throw on a border if you dont have one.
I like it mate. I'm so tired of ppl telling you only what's wrong with your tag. -_- It's like, get a brain. I agree the lighting is just a bit too bright, but not much. The C4d placement and blending is hotness. Love your style. Love the text, but it looks kind of blurry. Maybe sharpen it up a little. Great focul and nice work on the bg. Awesome job bro, Keep that hawt style comin'! ^_^