Another Spacescape

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  1. Oct 21, 2007 at 11:49 PM #1
    [.BC.] KriPTiQ

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  2. Oct 22, 2007 at 8:27 AM #2
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    The planets look great, but the background needs more. Maybe a sort of cloudy texture?
     
  3. Oct 22, 2007 at 9:50 AM #3
    [.BC.] KriPTiQ

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    Thanks for the comment Calabur, I originally had one but it didnt look right with the lighting I have on the planets. meh
     
  4. Oct 22, 2007 at 9:59 AM #4
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    pretty good for a first m8
     
  5. Oct 22, 2007 at 9:49 PM #5
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    Thank ya, I updated it
     
  6. Oct 22, 2007 at 10:55 PM #6
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    The planets stick out too much. Try blending them in a bit more (they are a bit too sharp). The stars are too pixely. Try a blur when creating them. Lens flare needs to go.

    Not bad.
     
  7. Oct 23, 2007 at 11:30 PM #7
    [.BC.] KriPTiQ

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    Fixed it up, i think... ha
     
  8. Oct 24, 2007 at 12:15 AM #8
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    Errr you need to:

    1. Remember compisition. In order for a piece to be amazing it need to have flow and order
    2. Nebulas don't apear in the shadow of a planet
    3. Work on the color flow :) Green with gray planets does not really go together
    4. Work on the nebulas/space dust

    Great start
     
  9. Oct 24, 2007 at 12:27 AM #9
    [.BC.] KriPTiQ

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    One of my planets is green, you didn't look hard enough.
     

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