Shakugan No Shana

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Alph-, Oct 21, 2007.

  1. Alph-

    Alph- Well-Known Member

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    C&C welcomed ^^
     
  2. Hoplite_A2

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    I hate it when nobody gives a comment.
    makes me feel bad.

    Ok here we go.
    I like the flowy, twirly effects a lot. ^_^
    The bg could use a slight blur though. And
    the focul could be a little darker imo too.

    But other than that, it's tightness mate. :)
    Love the text.
    Cept, maybe move the right side text a little more right
    to get it away from the focul. ;)

    Good work
     
  3. .TragiC.

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    like Hoplite said maybe blur some parts in the bg, but yea other than that i think you did a good job ^_^ looks Nice
     
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    the face looks a bit weird, like a bit too bright imo
     
  5. Alph-

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    I got it, thanks for pointing out abt the focal stuff. Thanks ^_^

    Okay, thanks. :)

    Haha the render itself had a very bright beach color on the face, I dont think I shld change it anyway because everything is quite bright too. XD
     
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    Wow, you did a great job doing effects and such.
    Altough (Like the others said) the face could use some darkening. That's the only thing I'm going to mention actually, I love it. :)
     
  7. Alph-

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    Heh okie, thanks for commenting ^_^
     
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    nice flow. i like tha tag
     
  9. MadRidz

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    monotoned. work on your coloring mainly. other than that nice effects.
     
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    nice it looks real good all around the sig, jus dont like the c4d like on the rite and left.
     
  11. Alph-

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    oO okay, thanks for commenting guys ^_^
     

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