The line of light is very random. I love the effect that are spread out around Jack. I love how you hadn't changed the stock color at all, and how you sstill made it work. Btw, I didn't mean the line of light is bad, just a bit "INYOURFACE."
i don't like the placement of c4d and the light :x but smudge is good btw, why is your credit negative? o.o