2nd Sig ...

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by freedompr, Oct 19, 2007.

  1. Oct 19, 2007 at 6:22 PM #1
    freedompr

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    :huh: plz make some c&c about it

    2nd aftr rturn
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  2. Oct 19, 2007 at 6:30 PM #2
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    Extremely bright with too much negative space. This tag has potential, but I think it's time to move on to some darker pieces.
     
  3. Oct 19, 2007 at 6:46 PM #3
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    yeah i will do a 2nd version thanks 4 the cmnt
     
  4. Oct 19, 2007 at 7:30 PM #4
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    i like it.. bright.. it took me a sec to see the face
     
  5. Oct 20, 2007 at 12:46 AM #5
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    thnx 4 ur commnt
     
  6. Oct 20, 2007 at 3:10 PM #6
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    c&C :P trying to improve my tecniques
     
  7. Oct 20, 2007 at 3:13 PM #7
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    try using a smaller height when you are doing tags. This would have been much better at a height of 80-100 pixels.
     
  8. Oct 20, 2007 at 3:41 PM #8
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    thanks again phoenix
     
  9. Oct 20, 2007 at 3:42 PM #9
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    Too bright needs more depth and contrast
     
  10. Oct 20, 2007 at 3:48 PM #10
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    Thanks :D ;)
     
  11. Oct 20, 2007 at 3:49 PM #11
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    Needs better focal.
     
  12. Oct 20, 2007 at 3:51 PM #12
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    btw what's a focal :huh: :mellow: all the help will be really apreciated
     
  13. Oct 20, 2007 at 4:30 PM #13
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    :huh: some help here :lol: i'm very rusty :lol: :lol:
     
  14. Oct 20, 2007 at 4:42 PM #14
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    focal point - where your eyes are drawn to.

    The sig doesn't really have a clear focal point.
     
  15. Oct 20, 2007 at 4:57 PM #15
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    :rolleyes: ;) thnx !! ^_^ :lol:
     

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