First Signature After 2 Years

My abilities went down by a lot, a LOT.

Feedback kindly appreciated.

 

Pretty damn good for a two-year break. Too much negative space on the right, text stands out too much, effects are nice.

 

Thanks for the feedback~!

 

the text isn't to bad, but it could be better
although he is right about the negative space,
you should use it to add more depth to the signature

but i applaud you for making such a good sig
since you've been on a 2 year break

 

I agree with everything said above. It lacks some depth and the C4D seems random.

 

Alrighty, I'll keep that in mind.

 

little depth and text takes attention away from the picure