i like it. but its a bit chaotic looking for my taste. you need to work on you text it doesn't fit with your tag and you need better lighting also work on your depth
Placement of text could be a bit improved. Also, as Hazed has said, lighting and depth need some work.
your getting better m8, everytime i look at your topics. work on the bg a little bit and take your time on it
I'm not a big fan of grudge. Try using a stock instead? Also, the text needs to be fixed. There's some great tutorials on text.