My First Render, Graw

This is my first attempt at making a render, and I think I did a good job. I'm know it's been done before, but just tell me what you think.
<original> http://nayyeri.net/misc/keyvan/WindowsLive..._graw2_1_63.jpg


Tell me what you think, what I should Improve on or anything else to help. Peace.

 

not to bad bit choppy round the head but with practis you will get it perfect.

hehe i did the same render but from a dif original last night

 

lol, like I said, I knew it was done before, but I didn't care. It didn't look like a hard one, and this is my first, so w/e. I was surprised of how good I did, ha. Peace

 

nice job for a 1st. I'm new too and posted my first sig under Signatures. peace.

 

i just noticed we both say peace at the end, lol. not too many do, but chea, peace.

 

Pretty nice cut for a first. Just remember to save it with a transparent background as a .png or .gif or w/e.

 

yea, transparent = important, lol. peace.