Rei - Team Arlington

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by sephiroth666, Oct 15, 2007.

  1. sephiroth666

    sephiroth666 Well-Known Member

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    i like the style you have going it will work out greatly for you in the future to already have a style, thought in my eyes this has way to much lighting on the left side of the render, like always take the time before creating a signature to find every lighting source on a render, than make it work with the signature. Flow: Your flow actually seems okay, depth: i would have to say that you need work with depth, like this signature you just posted, reopen it, get your burn tool, and apply the image on a new layer and burn the sides alot than actually burn the objects and effects that you think should be behind the render, than lighten a tiny bit of the objects infront of your sig and keep the renders color in between these too. I think you got alot of potential and anytime you need help just add my msn and ask bro :D ill help ya anytime

    EDIT: also i just noticed your focal, you should google composition and the rule of third :D its very helpful.
     
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    Listen to the post above me, and you'll have it going in no time.
    I agree, the focal isnt the best yes. But you'll learn.
    The text draws a bit much of attention.
    Some spots seem a bit over sharpened.
     
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    kk I'll work on it when I get home. psd files ftw!

    Thank you very much for the help.
     
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    like what the others have said plus work on the bg a little more
     

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