That first one's tight, but the bottom sigs have no focal point at all... I had to search for the render =\
v1 on the first. Love it. Now, the bottom ones bother me. The focal could be brought out alot more. But v2 looks good. D:
the first is definitely the secks (so is the show ) and i love the BG in the second but i agree that the render is too hidden by the effects. with the BG on the second you could prolly have the basics for an awesome abstract sig. just my 2 cents.