Hopelessnessism

<div align="center">Tried a slightly different style, made the c4d myself.
Hope ya'll like it.

I no longer feel
I have been here for so long
I no longer know
Should I be here?
This is the last time
Of my first life
I wish to find it before I cease
The Liberator that is here
Hopelessnessism</div>

 

I don't really know if the c4d belongs in there, also make the yellow line glossy because it kinda is supposed to be the focal(?)

Cool smudge you have there going on though =]

 

Looks naked without an orb

 

Thanks for the comments, im trying to try some other stuff which is why there is no orb.

I dunno how to make it glossy. And the c4d belongs. it's supposed to look as if it is shooting out the yellow beam.

 

My bad, double post.

 

Gaussian/Box Blur+Lighten=Glossiness

 

Ill try it.