Heres a new tag i made, its not what i usually do, cuz theres alot of smudging in this one, i dont really no if it looks good or bad, so plz comment! THX
Nice lighting. I love it. But the right seems a little weird with the white part ending suddenly when it touches the floor. Not really digging the font for the text too.
The colour on the left beside her head is a gross color compared to the right side, and the render. It's a bit off in saturation too. The text is okay, but the placement is boring. It just starts all aligned to the right, and then the left of the girl there's uneven space in there, I dunno how to explain, maybe some1 else may agree.
I don't like how the two colors appear all of a sudden, they should like..Fade into each other or flow together more.. I dunno if that makes sense,lol.
ok thx for the comments guys, ill make another version wen i get bak home, i agree with the comments, and ill change almost everything u told me.
I like it man, well done. But yeah, I agree with the color flow, and for some reason the right side doesn't look like it fits with the render (maybe its just that lamp) but whatever it is it seems more artistic comic-bookish than anime-ish. I dunno, maybe I'm just blind.
Agreed. That white part just seems to finish but still, lighting is secks and looks good overall. Great work bro.
