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Saw the render here and knew I had to use it.

v1:


v2:


v3:

 

Bump.

No C&C? I want you guys to tear it apart.

 

Heh,
Tear it apart?!

It's tight man.
Smecks flow (i'm a sucka for that flow ).
Great lighting too. I like v2 best.

Below his waist looks a little oversharpened
though.

Great job man,
one of your best imo.

 

Thanks man. Means a lot since you're the one who mainly C&C's most people's work.

And yes, I consider it one of my best. You should know, you've been giving most my sigs C&C. I am grateful for that. You have helped me get better.

 

The flow is wrong with the render's action. That c4d is supposed to go the other way, especially since a light source is there. Only makes sense that the c4d would go the other way so it would look like rays of light or something. :unsure:

 

Exactly what I thought. That's why I posted another version w/o the C4D.

 

Bump.

Anyone else want to rip it to pieces?

 

Good job!
He looks awesome in that sig
I just think some parts are a little too sharp

 

Ok you said rip it apart:
The lighting is too much
Render is blended poorly
Alot of it looks oversharpened
It lacks foreground effects

Oh, and i would go with v1.
It has potential just isnt there right now.

 

I like ver.1 better but I'd play around with the light source some, seems to white-ish, like artificial light. Right side of bg could use some work. Nice sig tho. From what I've seen of you this is certainly your best imo.

 

I couldn't tear it apart V2 Looks great man, gj

 

its very good.
but oversharpened.
and the render doesnt blend in

 

not bad..keep them coming

 

Version 3 added.
Made the lighting less overpowering.

Also changed the C4D to go with the flow.

 

Bump, C&C on teh new version>