This one's pretty nice bro. Really like the flow on this. Text isn't too shabby either. Try this - Burn some of the shadows slighty on her face. Bg too if ya want. Then blur some of the bg slighty and sharpen the render. This will make a pounding focul. And it would look super sweet. Very nice, One of your best imo. ^_^ (you don't HAVE to try it, just thought I'd throw it out there.)