...interesting concept, maybe if u can make it a bit darker, sum more depth, a stronger light source, and a movie-line border... yeah and v.1 looks best (in my opinion)
Its decent, a big thing with b&w tags is making them contrast just right...otherwise it gives a very very plain flat appearance. Its pretty good work though, nice composition and pretty nice effects.
Yep, Looks a little messy to me. Awesome concept man. Like how you did it. I would just blur some more around the focul so it's stands out a bit more. Good work
Looks like you were gettin some flow but the blur kinda hit it off... its bright could use some more + / - brightness and contrast for a b&w sig...
Not all tags have to have the right contrast. It depends who's making it. In this case, it doesn't look like you adjusted the contrast to make it look flat on purpose, or to give it contrast. Use the burn tool to add some darkness while keeping the current contrast, or just add a Black and White gradient on Multiply with the Fill on Low. You know. Having one side sharpened while the other side is blurred to have depth is rather...Old persay. Anyway, Sharpen up the whole thing and use the burn tool to add depth. You can also keep the focal the way it is by adding the depth without the blur, by burning the left side a bit more than everything else. Just a bit. That's something you could do anyway, you don't have to do it. But yeah, I like this tag a lot. You should try smudging that small square by the glowing circles, a bit distracting imo. And yeah, I agree with the dude above.
