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dunno about teh white box



Ver.2

 

Id lose the box...no doubt about it...also the sig seems a little too dark, playing around with some more effects and lightening it up could help it out a lot IMO.

 

yeh the box should go. there's no real focal too. it's nice sig though. gj.

 

Yep,
Agreed, it's a little too dark. :/
The white bar's no good.
The flow looks tight, but it would help if it was pulled out
by being lightened up a bit.

Let's see another version?

 

Um fire is red, not green. LOL.
Agreed with what is said above.

 

added ver.2

 

Cool, just try adding more effects, and brighten it up a bit

 

Definitely lose the white box. Since it's so dark the white box stands out a lot.

v2 is much better.

 

a good start, minor adj...keep it up!!