Save Me

<div align="center">Inspired by my own poem (as like my last one)

I need you, for my sake and your’s
I am tearing away layers of defense
To keep from losing you forever
I will always need to free myself from pity
Just to save you

Please don’t forget
I shall always remember
When you let me stand
So I will let you stand, when you need it
Just to save you, and I
Saving - Myself</div>

 

Your current has much better flow and this one seems like its faded even tho its b&w

 

I like it m8.
Peom's excellent too.

Looks a little faded though.
Like too dark.


Good work

 

It's meant to be faded, like dust from an explosion.

 

Mmmm,
Tha's nice mate.
I like it.

 

thanks.