Something is seriously wrong Depth is really bad lighting looks horrible and overall the sig is really crowded...
Oh come on. Don't get that attitude. It's not terrible. The flow's all over the place. lol Leave that stuff on the right out and it'd be fine. Keep at it. You don't suck, just need practice.
it looks like u put in some c4ds, then a sprite, and then a really strong light source all of it wasn't done so well