Well, Im sure youve seen me post one or 2 of these around...but I'm just looking for some C&C and some advice...the good and the bad of each one would be awesome...thanks
I'll give C&C on each for ya. 1:Concept of the storm trooper ripping away is nice, exacution thoe im not feeling it ... i think a smaller render or larger canvas would have exzibited it better, and made the effects pop! Its not a complete bad tag, the effects on the edges on the left and left top are SWEET! and they are wht stands out for me the most. Overall : 6.5/10 2: i think this shows pretty good depth in a tag however i think the background is far to blured which creates that big feeling of seperation between the render and background. I love the feel and tight lighting, an im quiet sure the background minus all that blur would have been very nice. Overall : 5-6/10 3:This tag is TIGHT BRO, greate flow and the effects fit well with the flow. The style of the tag compliments the renders style. Too me there is nothing i would change or add to this tag, its not mind blowing original but its well composed. Greate Job. Overall : 7-8/10 4:Nice idea of hiding your name, i would have run it along his bandanna. The lighting on this tag is one you are more likely to see on a real life render, and the reason for this is because its the most NATURAL style of lighting. The overall lighting is far to spread, for the idea and direction i think you were aiming at i would have tried to refine the lighting to an orb with a few streaks ascaping, it really overpowers the whole tag. From what i can see of the effects they are fairly nice, "grungey" but the render reflection dosnt flow the tag. Overall im not feeling this one too much. Overall : 4/10 Hope this is helpfull
Yep! ^_^ I'll give what I think too. 1: Good concept, but a few things were done wrong imo. The edges of the stuff coming off him shouldn't be sharpened they draw away from the focul. Try to keep yer focul in one spot. The effects also look a tad boring. :/ Could use a few more effect C4ds imo. 2: Pretty darn nice. Like the subtle scanlines. Great focul on this one. Maybe a few areas could be brought out a little more, but it's nice nonetheless. Love the effects up in the right corner. Gives it some smex depth. ^_^ Lighting don't look good to meh. :/ I think it would look better if you ran a white radial right above his head, then erased/burned around his face untill it looked good. Text is ok, but I think it could be better. This one's tight overall. 3: Hmm... The dark behind her just kills it imo. :/ The fractalish stuff in the bg looks pretty nice. But the dark is not good. The dark, dark, dark. That's the only thing I don't like. It's like a black bar of bad news behind her. Good concept though, I'd give it another fling. 4: I like the lighting in this one a lot. Goes well with the render's shadows and stuff. The compo's nice too. Like the effect C4ds in this one too. Nicely done. Things that could be better: Lighting - You could burn some of the shadows to create a deeper look to the lighting. Render Placement - I think he could come Up just a tad bit. Brightness - I would mess with the contrast a little bit to get a darker feel. not much, but a little. Overall, good work bro ^_^
