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edit: Version 2

 

I don't like the border and the empty spaces.

It looks kinda incomplete. Could use some more effects but I don't like how the focal was put away to the side and lots of empty space.

 

Yup,
The render doesn't look good on the side unless you've got some kick butt text on the the other side.
It looks empty cause of that. But the cliping and stuff is pretty cool.

Just needs some tweakage

 

Well, I have the PSD, I'll try to fill the left side a bit more, probably blur it a bit more and try to bring out the render.

I suck at text, but I'll try. Thanks for C&C.

 

bump. I would like more advice as well.

 

i'm not sure about the text brushes (looks like text brushes, but might be actual text), but i like the colours, render, and other brushes.

 

It's actual text. I included some smudging and layer masks to fix opacity problems.

 

I put an update to it on my first post. Version 2 is up. I tried filling the gap and changed the light tones.

 

I would like comments on the 2nd version. I really don't want to have to make another topic for it D:.

 

Last bump on this, and if no replies, I'm remaking the topic -_-

 

The V2 has got some kind of bright colour but could work better on background to fit this

 

TBH, it would look a million times better if you removed the render, got rid of the texture on the background, a recoloured a little and left the border off.