!<<.spidey.>>!

Take a look. Just made this today after school. C&C Please.



Thanks
Your comments and criticisms are highly appreciated.
<3
Stone

 

I don't like the text, and it looks kinda unfinished. But it looks straight, if you fixed the text, and added some more it'd be a lot nicer.

 

Umm, well, fix that ghastly black line around his hand, and add some depth for good measure, fix up that text a little, and it's one sweet tag. Good work.

 

thanks thanks anymore?

 

The colour does not really fit the cartoon , other then that its good