!oh Shizz!

i caught some rust

nothing special but c+c




ya dig?

 

you shouldn't duplicate the render and change his position .. i don't like that part ... but .. it's still a good one ..

 

The duplicate is quite nice to be honest, but remove the little boxes.

 

yea thought about removing those boxes too

rusty


thanks for comment tho i need more!

 

Yep. The boxes around the focal are bah. It'll be better without them.

The tag will look much better without the duplicate and the boxes imo.

 

Hmm...he looks sober here! LoL I'm with Dior...Im feeling the duplicate, maybe lower the opacity a little, and get rid of the boxes itll be awesome. Nice work on the text as well!

 

ok its clear now wat i have to do

any other comments before we wrap it up??

:bump:

 

I don't really like it, I feel like too much is going on. But your current tag and avatar look real good.