your off to a better start then i was lol more texture in bg and it will help depth also some foreround effects to blend in the render
I suggest trying some tutorials to learn some new stuff if you're a beginner. The text could use some work & it could use some more effects, but keep trying and you'll get something nice
dont try too had with the text, looks like bevel and all sorts of styles. nice render and colours though.
Hm, can someone add me on msn and explain rendering to me, I have tried it alot but can't figure out how to, and thanks for other comments. Msn: [email protected] Also we can have "entertaining" convo's =p