alot of the awesomenss is pretty much the picture. but i do like how you transformed it into a black and white signature. Also, the text needs to be moved, definately. But i love it, i truly do.
Try putting the text vertically, and put checker points through it, here, let me try to illustrate. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| T-----------------------------------------------A-----------------------------------------------------------| ------------------------------------------M-----------G-----------------------------------------------------| E--------------------------------------I----------------------E----------------------------------------------| --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| X------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| T------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
