I liked the concept you used with the c4ds, but they're kind of overused here. The tag could be better without text, and the lighting should be on top.
>Word. Yea, I know. Yea, I used over used the c4ds and the text isn't so great. I mistakingly put the lighting on the bottom and after I was done, I realized I was supposed to put it on top instead. xD
Yes, text could be better and i'm getting the illusion of massive shoulder, but thats not your fault. but yeah, other then that, great.
I agree with the text and the over usuage of C4Ds but nice attempt at it anyhow. Keep trying and you'll get something better.