yeah change up the text. your light source doesnt match the overall lighting of the tag as well. colors could be a little more varied as well.
Text and light source could be improved quite a bit IMO. Also, the render looks kinda squished, did you hold down shift when you were re-sizing?
yea u made this by following this tutorial right? http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php...&hl=caveman