Looks a bit too simple, could use some more effects IMO. It's kinda disturbing that the scanlines are going over the focal and text could use some work IMO.
Thanks for your input guys Im kinda new to making sigs, so please tell me a way to blend in the render? Is there a definite way or do you have to do it according to the situation?
you can use smudging or filter effects also shapes or c4d effects and soft erasing some of the edges that are not in light and areas heavy in effects
There are lots of ways to blend renders in. Tutorials that are a bit more in-depth should/most likely tell you how to blend your render in.
Hmmmm OKay, Ill try and do that and Ill post what I get BTW Is there a tutorial on this? I really appreciate your help