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This is my outcome from [.BC.] KriPTiQ's tutorial. C&C is welcome

This is another tag I made just then....

 

Light source is awesome

 

His sword lighting, and the lighting from the left excite me. You've done really well with this. It's just the text could be a better quality, easier to read, when the lighting is such good quality, it makes me expect more from the text.

Very nice though, <3 <3.

 

Thanks for the comments guys.

 

Wowsers...
Thats sweet.
Really love, love, love the lighting.
Also, the bg creates some rad depth.

Text looks good imo.

Nice work man

 

Very nice, lighting is good, nice colors
keep it up.

 

Thanks guys Just added another tag... I think i'm improving. C&C again please.