Spawn Sig

By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

v5 with text


By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

v5 without text


By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

 

Nice, but the text could be much better. :tongue:

 

Yea, blend the text a bit more. Its too white. I would suggest using some cool layer settings or just lowering the opacity to like 50%

 

hows bout v2?


By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

 

Text is bad, i think it needs more colors and its a bit messy or maybe its just not my style.

 

thanks for the comments

 

Try to make the text more redish but with some contrast. Since that portion is dark, you might be looking for a bright red or something like that.

 

v3?


By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

 

Try to work on the text and the focal is kinda hard to make out. Too monoton-ish IMO.

 

v4?


By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

 

Ehhh,
Not feelin' the fire bro.
Maybe make the text a different font.

Focul's much better though.

 

v5

with text


By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

without text


By bdiddie at 2007-09-26

 

Yep,
Mucho better.

I would almost say without text looks best.

Not bad man.
Keep it up.

 

thanks

 

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