Honestly... patience is a virtue you know... *grizzle grumble* Remove those effects over his face. The fonts for the text are horrible, and the text placement is off. It lacks depth and flow. Colours are good.
dont keep bumping your topic every minute or so cos youve got no replies m8 otherwise you'll get punished for spam -_- looks good to me, erase the stuff on his face and it'll look better.