it's really well done, but the black solid behind the character is very distracting, and holds a bit of controversy. I don't get what it's there for, and if it was a purpose effect, can you elaborate? If there's anyway to fix it, i'd say blend it in a bit more, or brush some color around it like you did in front of the man. The text is very basic. It's positioning is great, but it's a little -too- hidden.
I dont like the colors in it. OMG is Xioushi UV Soaked.............if it aint then it must be his twin they look identical.