Hellgate London [ X I O ]

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First sig with C4Ds.

I loved the render, so I had to try new stuff with it.

C&C Please.

EDIT // Added Versions 2-4. New lighting, colors, text, etc.

 

looks good, but the london text is a little too big imo

 

text doesn't help much, jsut way too dominant

 

Please elaborate. How could this be fixed? Is it because it is just too big? Or is it too visable?

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Nice effects and coloring.. just fix the text it it will be ok..

 

The text is just a little too dominating. It takes away from the focal point, which is your render. All those zero's and one's should be smaller, and blended more into the BG, so as not to stand out so much. Other than that, very nice.

 

BUMP ::

Added Versions 2, 3, and 4.

C&C Please.

 

One more bump before bed.