Whee my third creation, this time it's without any tutorial help, just my own brain. Figured it'd be more fun to do something of my own. And since my last two renders were sort of real life, I wanted to try an anime kinda thing. I think I could've sharpened up the render abit, cause the stock itself was a little blur so that I get a better focal point. I'm still kinda new to all this... so please guide me along =) Comments please~ =) Here's the edited version after consolidating all the critiques, hope it is better! I think the edited version is nicer, but the outward flow kinda got reduced. On the first one I feel as if he's blowing his ass out trying to use his power or whatever
For a third sig, it's outstanding. Here are a few things you should try: - making a border - making text more visible and legible (try blending options for the text layer) - adding a larger variety of colors.
Alright, I editted it after getting some comments from different sites, I sharpened it, tried to add more depth with different gradient maps, added a border and drop shadow on text, but at the expense of some colours. I wonder which one you guys feel is better? wrapped in quote tags to so you guys can see the border... what the heck i'll just post this on top, i think no one saw this
yeah with the gradient it looks much better, warmer feeling from it ^^ border is good to. try to get some more depth in it to
=) thanks for the kind comments! Any suggestions how I could pump more depth into it? I'm still not very familiar with all the functions, I usually just try my luck with each one and learn along the way
You could sharpen the focal point, IMO... But thumbs up on your 3 sig that rocks. Oh, but I don't like the circle that you drew around him. Too distracting
lol yeah it was the render... I sharpened it on my editted version on the other post already, I couldn't do it any further because the render is a little blur in the first place, i started having those white lines when i did it too much.
