First Post, First Thread, First Sigs!

Hey, one of the members here who I know in real life (Kamaki) has been helping me do some of my first sigs. I'm about to show you one heavily influenced by his styles, then one that's a lot more me. They are both of Big Daddies from the awesome game Bioshock by the way:

My first one:


Mine:


Please, be honest in feedback. Flattering me will only stop me from advancing. Advice would also be appreciated.

Thanks! B)

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2nd one's pretty cool, but the pen lines around his arm kills it.

7/10

 

tbh they both arnt very good. work on lighting and mroe advanced effects, both tags are very bland

 

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Thanks for the advice so far, keep it comin'!