Nice work on the background. For a moment as the sig was loading, I thought the boobs were spilling out lol.
Not sure if you meant to do this or not... but the cut around her hair to the left of her face looks just too obvious and unnatural to me.
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhh the render rocks no doubt hehe and yeah brb nice effects don't bother to add text its fine just like that you might try it but i feel like it might not fit in