Hmm... Not really. The effects aren't bad, but the sig is just not my taste. It looks a little bit over sharpened. It's not bad really. I just don't really feel it. Good work
It's lacking a lot of WOW factor. the round-ish shape in front of the character's face just turned me completely away from saying, "WOW that's pretty cool!" For once the text has some originality, which is nice to see, and I like the lighting effects. As for the colors, it all goes well together, except for the dark green BG color. I hope this helps, just pointing out some thigns that could be a lot more cleaner or appealing.
oke thx for the comment it was diffecult to get some wow effect cause the c4d is btight and it bocome brighter with some contrast so i dont know how i can fix that :S